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From: The Writer's Desk: rework!


Go for it!

Game Instructions: This can improve a work whose Potential is 60 or less - and very occasionally, a little more than that.

Unlocked with 1 x Potential, 2 x Manuscript Page


Challenge information

Broad, Persuasive 50

  • 35 - very chancy (42%)
  • 43 - chancy (51%)
  • 51 - modest (61%)
  • 60 - very modest (72%)
  • 68 - low-risk (81%)
  • 76 - straightforward (91%)
  • 84 - straightforward (100%)

Success

A raid on the fortress!

You've dared the shambolic barricades of verbiage and brought out a shining... no, let's not talk like that. That's how all this started. Cut it out. Cut it all out. This won't increase Potential above 60, though.


Failure

Shorter, but not better

There's less of it. You think, now, that's probably a shame.