A Daring Edit
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From: The Writer's Desk: rework!
Go for it!
Game Instructions: This can improve a work whose Potential is 60 or less.
Unlocked with 
1 x Potential, 
2 x Manuscript Page
Challenge information
Broad, 
Persuasive 50
- 35 - very chancy (42%)
- 43 - chancy (51%)
- 51 - modest (61%)
- 60 - very modest (72%)
- 68 - low-risk (81%)
- 76 - straightforward (91%)
- 84 - straightforward (100%)
Success
A raid on the fortress!
You've dared the shambolic barricades of verbiage and brought out a shining... no, let's not talk like that. That's how all this started. Cut it out. Cut it all out.
Success Instructions: This won't increase Potential above 62, though.
Persuasive is increasing…
You've lost 1 x Manuscript Page
You've gained 2 x Potential (up to 62)
Failure
Shorter, but not better
There's less of it. You think, now, that's probably a shame.
- Persuasive is increasing…
- You've lost 1 x Manuscript Page
