Editing An Innocent Fictional Scene

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|Description = A vision of loveliness, to cut even the most jaded heart to the quick.
|Success title = Old, far-off things
|Success description = The work is brief—a single scene of a couple strolling the Champs-Élysées, arm in arm [...] The Veteran Privvy-Counsellor catches up with you outside, with a complimentary sherry. "Marvellous stuff. Not wise. But marvellous."
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 |Description = A vision of loveliness, to cut even the most jaded heart to the quick.
 |Success title = Old, far-off things
-|Success summary = Your audience d__n well better appreciate all the b___y hours you spent on your film. And they do. The Court is moved to tears by the scene you've shown them: a well-dressed couple strolling, arms entwined, down a street in a radiant Paris. Even the Captivating Princess excuses herself. Outside, the Veteran Privy Counsellor brings you a sherry and praises your work as unwise, but marvellous.
+|Success description = The work is brief—a single scene of a couple strolling the Champs-Élysées, arm in arm [...] The Veteran Privvy-Counsellor catches up with you outside, with a complimentary sherry. "Marvellous stuff. Not wise. But marvellous."
-|Success description = The Court is entirely enthralled. [...]a single scene of a couple strolling the Champs-Élysées,[...] their smiles dazzling [...]
-[...] There are few powdered faces not running with make-up[...] The Veteran Privy Counsellor catches up with you[...] "[...] Not wise. But marvellous."
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