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From: The Writer's Desk: rework!

Who knows what lies across the Unterzee? ...well, you do.

Game Instructions: This can improve a work whose Potential is 80 or less.

Unlocked with 4 x Manuscript Page, 1 x Memory of Distant Shores, Potential 1

Challenge information

Broad, Persuasive 80

  • 55 - very chancy (41%)
  • 68 - chancy (51%)
  • 82 - modest (61%)
  • 95 - very modest (71%)
  • 108 - low-risk (81%)
  • 122 - straightforward (91%)
  • 134 - straightforward (100%)


Throngs and dominions

The obsidian crowds and ivory armies, the spirềd cities, the orchards of savage apples, the jungles teeming with serpent-dreams, the places where the world is broken by time and doubt. Your readers will walk there with you.


Implausibility upon implausibility

A hole in the world. Birds which hover like dragonflies. Whirlpools which give back their prey. A frog which gestates its young in its mouth. A sort of dragon made of cake. No. No, you can't put this in.