Editing A light work based around a Neathy folk tale

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|Description = An old-fashioned sort of ballet. The Veteran Privy Counsellor gets very excited about this sort of thing.
 
|Description = An old-fashioned sort of ballet. The Veteran Privy Counsellor gets very excited about this sort of thing.
 
|Success title = The dance of the rat and the spider
 
|Success title = The dance of the rat and the spider
|Success description = […] It was fiercely difficult to find dancers who could effectively impersonate rats and sorrow-spiders[…]
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|Success description = The form may be somewhat behind the times, but you have modernised it […] It was fiercely difficult to find dancers who could effectively impersonate rats and sorrow-spiders, but you managed it somehow, and now the curtain is rising on opening night.
  
[…] the Veteran Privy Counsellor and a few of his friends are enchanted. The rest of the Court is not[…] The Empress does little to conceal her boredom […]
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