Editing Blast the Ravenous Lifeberg with all you've got (The Sea of Voices)

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|Icon = lifeberg_top.png
|From Storylet title = Approaching the (Zee-Beast Location){{!}}Approaching the Lifeberg's Hunting Grounds
|ID = 255249
|Description = With prey this colossal, accuracy is not a problem. […]
|Description summary = The description varies based on how much the Lifeberg has been damaged.
{{Variant table|Condition = Remaining Mass of the Ravenous Lifeberg|Condition alias = Remaining Mass|Effect = Description|Compact = yes
|Value 24001 and up = What is unclear, however, is whether you'll be able to slow the d__n thing down.
|Value 16001 - 24000 = Even with the Citizen's Armada carving away steamer-sized sheets of ice, the lifeberg fills the horizon.
|Value 8001 - 16000 = Repeated onslaughts have left it diminished, but it still moves doggedly westwards.
|Value 1 - 8000 = – even at a shadow of its former size, the lifeberg is an easy target.
}}
|Unlocked with = {{Unlock|Zailing to Destination:|383 - Lifeberg Hunting Grounds ([[Join the Citizen's Armada to hunt the Ravenous Lifeberg (The Sea of Voices){{!}}Join the Citizen's Armada to hunt the Ravenous Lifeberg]])}}, {{Unlock|In Pursuit of a Zee-Beast|7 + ({{Use|Elusiveness of your Quarry|Type=Math}}/20)}}
|Success title = Wreckage in the Sea of Voices
|Success description = You […] bombard the lifeberg with every gun, cannon, and projectile […] a sheet of fleshy ice calves into the zee.

[…] The debris of the lifeberg's latest meal – a Polythremean Steamer – wails as you retrieve it from the thaw.

[…] You've done your part […]
|Success summary = Part of the description varies based on how much the Lifeberg has been damaged.
{{Variant table|Condition = Remaining Mass of the Ravenous Lifeberg|Condition alias = Remaining Mass|Effect = Description|Compact = yes
|Value 28001 and up = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues surging westwards toward London.
|Value 24001 - 28000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues seething westwards toward London.
|Value 20001 - 24000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues ploughing westwards toward London.
|Value 16001 - 20000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues stalking westwards toward London.
|Value 12001 - 16000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues pushing westwards toward London.
|Value 8001 - 12000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues slogging westwards toward London. ''(wiki note: still slogging at 7711, for the second lifeberg of 2022?)''
|Value 4001 - 8000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues struggling westwards toward London.
|Value 1 - 4000 = Meanwhile, the Ravenous Lifeberg continues limping westwards toward London.
}}
|Success Instructions = You will be able to trade your Valorous Deeds for rewards from the Admiralty once the lifeberg threat has been quelled.
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*{{Move|Your Cabin}}
*{{Drop|Remaining Mass of the Ravenous Lifeberg|1|message={{UnI|Remaining Mass of the Ravenous Lifeberg is now (new value).}}}}
*{{Gain|Emetic Revelation|1 x}}
*{{Gain|Aeolian Scream|1 x}}
*{{Gain|Primordial Shriek|1-197? x}}
*{{Gain|Trace of the First City|1-12? x}}
*{{Gain|Officially Recognised Valorous Deed|1 x}}
*{{Gain|A Hunter of Zee-Beasts|1 x}}
*{{Item Loss|Zailing...|message=Zailing... has been reset! A new leg on your journey, or an arrival at port?|now=0}}
*{{Gone|Zailing to Destination:}}
*{{Gone|Zailing Route|hidden=yes}}
*{{Gone|Distance to Zail|hidden=yes}}
*{{Progress Reset|In Pursuit of a Zee-Beast}}
*{{Gone|Elusiveness of your Quarry|hidden=yes}}
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 *{{Gain|Emetic Revelation|1 x}}
 *{{Gain|Aeolian Scream|1 x}}
-*{{Gain|Primordial Shriek|1-197 x}} (based on {{Use|Watchful|Appearance=Base Watchful|Type=Math}}<ref name="scale">Material rewards are determined by a [[Logistic Scaling]] formula. <noinclude>
+*{{Gain|Primordial Shriek|1-197? x}}
+*{{Gain|Trace of the First City|1-12? x}}
-The formulas for both rewards have a midpoint of {{IL|Watchful}} 190, and a scaling factor ''k'' of 0.1. In other words, all formulas use a Logistic basis of:
-<math>L(W) = \frac{1}{1 + e^{-0.1 \times (W - 190)}}</math>
-<br />
-This basis function goes from 0 to 1 as Watchful increases. They differ in the heights and y-offsets:
-*{{IL|Primordial Shriek}}: 1 + 200 × L(W) (i.e. height of 200, y-offset of 1)
-*{{IL|Trace of the First City}}: 1 + 11 × L(W) (i.e. height of 11, y-offset of 1)
-Sample values are shown in the table below:
-{| class="article-table"
-!{{IL|Watchful|Appearance=Base Watchful}}!!150!!170!!190!!210!!230
-|-
-|{{IL|Primordial Shriek}}||5||25||101||177||197
-|-
-|{{IL|Trace of the First City}}||1||2||6||11||12
-|}
-</noinclude></ref>)
-*{{Gain|Trace of the First City|1-12 x}} (based on {{Use|Watchful|Appearance=Base Watchful|Type=Math}})<ref name="scale"></ref>)
 *{{Gain|Officially Recognised Valorous Deed|1 x}}
 *{{Gain|A Hunter of Zee-Beasts|1 x}}