Editing Follow (Hinterland City)

{{Action
|Icon = greyman.png
|ID = 261541
|From Storylet title = A Grey Man and His Dog, Far Off
|Description = Who are they? What are they?
|BroadQuality = {{IL|Watchful}}
|BroadDiff = 170
|Success title = Surpassing ordinary
|Success description = The man would not stand out in London. He is only wrong here – specifically here. He belongs on an omnibus, or waiting in a bank, or swiping at pigeons with his cane. It is as though someone had formed him out of London fog and coal dust.
}}
*{{Success Increase|Watchful}}
*{{Gain|Exploration of a Hinterland City|now=7 - Familiar with the Man and his Wolf|message=You have begun to observe the things that threaten the City.}}
*{{Gain|The City Waning|+4 CP}}
*{{Airs|Airs of Passengers|hidden=yes}}
* {{Gain|Hinterland City - Recent News|occurrence=5 - Alarms about the Grey Man|hidden=yes}}
OR
*{{Gain|Hinterland City - Recent News|occurrence=6 - Alarms about the wolf|hidden=yes}}

{{Failure}}
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 *{{Gain|Hinterland City - Recent News|occurrence=6 - Alarms about the wolf|hidden=yes}}
-{{Failure
+{{Failure}}
-|Failure title = Stone
-|Failure description = There is no self behind his eyes. You have met monsters and devils and those without souls, but all of those have a mind that looks out at you.
-This man is shaped like a Londoner [...] But something is missing. Whatever [...] distinguishes a particular person [...]
-}}
-*{{Failure Increase|Watchful}}
-*{{Gain|Nightmares|+2 CP}}
-*{{Gain|Exploration of a Hinterland City|now=7 - Familiar with the Man and his Wolf|message=You have begun to observe the things that threaten the City.}}
-*{{Gain|Hinterland City - Recent News|occurrence=5 - Alarms about the Grey Man|hidden=yes}}
-*{{Gain|The City Waning|+4 CP}}
-*{{Airs|Airs of Passengers|hidden=yes}}